A worship song I wrote

[AquaBlue]

Ok, I know this is a song, but I posted it here anyway, because I want a Christian perspective on this. On a post that got deleted, I explained that I got a calling from God to write songs, and here's one of the ones that I wrote. I want a honest opinion. Thanks.

Holy of Holies

Holy of Holies
Glory of glories
What you mean to me
The savior of all
My everything
Above all the King of kings

When you first came into my life
I didn’t know where to turn
Then you showed me
What was in store
And how much I am worth

If the world were to end tomorrow
I would still praise your name
Because I’d be somewhere better
Then I was yesterday

Holy of Holies
Glory of glories
What you mean to me
The savior of all
My everything
Above all the King of kings

Sometimes I want to give up
And leave this world behind
But you appeared to me
And put your hand in mine

My provider
My everything
Exalted prince of peace
Nothing compares in all this world
To the wonders that you bring

Holy of Holies
Glory of glories
What you mean to me
The savior of all
My everything
Above all the King of kings

[admin]

That's really good!

[Arya]

that's awesome!!!!

[jesusmybff4life]

Bravo!! That is really good *high five* I'll buy it when it comes out on relase!1 :-)

[Soulfire79]

Hey! That's pretty good! Does it have a tune yet?

[AquaBlue]

The said:

Hey! That's pretty good! Does it have a tune yet?

Actually, it does have a tune. I have a friend who's in the church band and she's helping me think of tunes for my songs.

[Meg]

That is totally awsome! i really like i!

[Heather]

;D It is totally AWESOME!!!!!

[ProphetessOfGod89]

That's really good

~Amanda