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Post by EyesofanAngel20 on Mar 27, 2005 9:26:01 GMT -5
Here I am waiting for you. Are you waiting for me too? Here I am looking for you. Are you looking for me too?
I know your out there, I just wished I knew where. I hope your waiting for me Because we are meant to be.
I know this isn't a good poem. I want to add more to it, but Im drawing a blank right now. Well, let me know what y'all think.
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Post by snowangel24 on Mar 27, 2005 9:38:52 GMT -5
its ok. it would be alot better if you added more to it. keep writing!
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Post by LonelyFreak25 on Mar 27, 2005 16:48:33 GMT -5
I think it's looking great. Try adding more!
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Post by EyesofanAngel20 on Mar 30, 2005 0:36:01 GMT -5
yeah ill try. im blanking now tho! gah. not good.
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