The Love of lies

[Bowler Chick]

here is my first ever song!!It's not very good.

Once upon a time,
I loved you.
You made me so happy for a while.
But,now me and you are over just as fast as we began.
Oh,** you were such a liar,
such a liar,
such a liar,

you swore your love to me,then riped it all apart.
Oh ** you were such a liar,
such a liar,
such a liar!

I was just a chick you placed beside you to take somone's place,just to see what you were missing.
Seeing if the grass is greener on the other side.
Guess I wasn't good enough for you,
Oh ** you were such a liar,
such a liar,
such a liar.

Hope your happy now babe,
cause you will never get my love back,
never get the laughing and joking back.
you will Never get me back
Cause ** you were such a liar,
such a liar,
such a liar.

** is a name I don't want to put on here

[Bowler Chick]

anyone?

[Critter]

I like it

[stardust15]

Well written.

[Bowler Chick]

stardust15 said:

Well written.

lol....

[godfallen]

Not the best I've seen.

godfallen

[ava]

Bowler said:

I was just a chick you placed beside you to take somone's place

sounds almost exactly like avril lavigne's song

[godfallen]

Lol, that's what I noticed.

godfallen

[Bowler Chick]

godfallen said:

Not the best I've seen.

godfallen

oh really?? why not?

[lola]

It's okay, but a little repetitive.

[Bowler Chick]

haha,I remember writing that!!
wow..what a long time ago,all the poems I'm writing latley are kinda oppsite...lol now they are love poems!!