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Post by EyesofanAngel20 on Apr 2, 2005 23:05:33 GMT -5
I didnt put neither cuz then id feel bad...ok here they are: ps: this is for a poetry contest so i need to know which one is good. if y'all ahve any titles in mind for these post them too!
The boy of my dreams is standing next to me, But he doesn't seem to see that we're ment to be. There he is, as wonderful as the stars in the sky. His wavy black hair and his baby blue eyes Make my thoughts of him linger. The promise ring on his finger And the Christian t-shirts he wears Shows me that he cares About saving himself for the girl with who he's meant to be. Dear God, I pray, please let that girl be me.
The boy of my dreams is standing next to me. He doesn't even notice that we're meant to be. I wonder if he's even thought if I'm the one. I already know that he's my only one. He wears a promise ring on his hand That proves just where he stands. I'm pretty sure he's never been kissed And I know he's never been involved in a physical bliss. He has wavy black hair and baby blue eyes That are as magnigicent as the stars in the sky. He's everything I want in a man And I hope that he's in God's plan For my future mate. He's never been on a date, Or even held a girl's hand. That silver band On his finger Proves that his thoughts do not linger On things their not suppossed to. I know he's saving himself for the girl with whom he's suppossed to be. Dear God, I pray, let that girl be me.
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Post by stardust15 on Apr 2, 2005 23:07:05 GMT -5
first one
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Post by gopher on Apr 2, 2005 23:11:07 GMT -5
I accidentally voted both. I meant to vote for the frist one.
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Post by EyesofanAngel20 on Apr 3, 2005 1:38:28 GMT -5
*tear* i like the second one better. i know poeticly wise it skunks, but i like the message beter.
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