rosey
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my poem
Nov 2, 2005 10:55:16 GMT -5
Post by rosey on Nov 2, 2005 10:55:16 GMT -5
"Success does not come easily"
Grasp the silence And hold it close Not often does it visit
Face the fear That has grown inside You overcome nothing it you let it stay
Bare with pain For it is the essence of life Without it appreciation would be lost
Accept your failures Get up and start again Failure shapes who you are
Attend to your wounds Don't let them bleed forever They will heal in time and make you a better person
Lastly, head the advice given Think abou tit persistantly For it may hold the answer you're looking for
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my poem
Nov 23, 2005 18:22:29 GMT -5
Post by teh_sandy on Nov 23, 2005 18:22:29 GMT -5
"Success does not come easily" Grasp the silence And hold it close Not often does it visit Face the fear That has grown inside You overcome nothing it you let it stay Bare with pain For it is the essence of life Without it appreciation would be lost Accept your failures Get up and start again Failure shapes who you are Attend to your wounds Don't let them bleed forever They will heal in time and make you a better person Lastly, head the advice given Think abou tit persistantly For it may hold the answer you're looking for those are the only typos I caught. Overall, I really like it!
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